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border life into their stories. Immigration, drugs and rela- tionships among Mexicans and Americans appear in all three novels, and, in that sense, each of the three stories is inter- twined with its setting. But some of the weaving is tight and solid, while some is sloppy. And some of the details are flat-out wrong. Best-selling author Nevada Barr has written a series of mys- teries in which retired park ranger Anna Pigeon roams from national park to national park tripping over corpses. In Borderline (2009), Pigeon joins a doomed river trip through Santa Elena Canyon. For me, however, the story and setting didn’t intertwine tightly. Much of the tale could have happened on any river trip through any canyon in the American West. And some the details just aren’t right. Two examples made me wince. To create danger on the three-day excursion through Santa Elena Canyon, Barr caus- es the Rio Grande to run high and swift, but the first condition contradicts the second. The Rio Grande running at such a pace would have propelled the rafters through the canyon in hours, not days. Later in the story, after danger and disaster have struck, Anna Pigeon struggles to locate the corpse of the murdered river guide at dusk because the guide was dressed in, “a dark shirt and black silk long johns.” Not exactly the outfit a Terlingua river guide would choose to protect herself from the Texas sun. Former Marfa resident Allana Martin does a tighter job of connecting her plot to Far West Texas. In Death of a Myth Maker (2001), she depicts a Marfa tipping between old and new. Her female protagonist, Texana Jones, runs a trading post in a fictional town very similar to Candelaria. In con- trast to Barr’s story peopled with visitors to Big Bend National Park, Martin popu- lates her border communities with long-time residents and natives – the single important exception being the bad guy. (Isn’t it always an outsider who causes trouble around here?) Her details of small-town life ring true. “That’s how invita- tions are posted around here. We post signs at the two places everyone gets to sooner or later. Everyone is invited and almost everyone shows up.” I particu- larly liked this tiny scene that takes place in Carmen’s Café as Texana notices the “glances in our direction as Marfa made note of Jake’s arrival and took a reading on the out-of-town lawyer.” My single quibble with Martin’s place setting is the inclusion of a stop at the Marfa Lights in the opening pages. It felt to me more like an excuse to include this most famous bit of local celebrity rather a cru- cial part of the unfolding plot. Arriving in Marfa about a decade after Texana Jones, DeMer’s protagonist opens a restaurant in a 100-year-old adobe building (reminiscent of Carmen’s) with an attached vegetable garden (reminiscent of Cochineal). Catering to the influx of well-heeled newcom- ers who expect more than tacos and burgers, Chef Brett serves barbecue “with a variety of unexpected Asian-tinged rubs and sauces, along with elevated Texas comfort food like chick- en-fried Kobe steak.” And because Brett lived in Marfa as a boy, DeMers can include details of both old and new Marfa. Characters range from the “dishonest rancher, heart- less womanizer, absent father and all-round lousy human being” who was Chef Brett’s father to the “dot-com zillion- aires” buying up local ranches and spending time at the “organic farmers market (and) upscale bookstore.” But does the tale pass my two-pronged test? Yes, if you overlook the body count – the total of people actually mur- dered around Marfa in the past 100 years is lower than the num- ber of corpses in Marfa Shadows. Other than that little detail, the story intertwines well with the setting. Only in Marfa in the first decade of the new century could a transplanted Houston chef open an upscale barbeque restaurant, re-connect with a now-famous high school sweet- heart, get entangled in the art and drug trades, encounter immigration problems and face- off with the local small-town sheriff in the same week. And the details are mostly right. From the Food Shark to Kathy’s Kosmic Kowgirl Kafe, DeMers cements his charac- ters’ connection to the locale with details that ring true, although I suspect that the Big Bend Sentinel never paid big bucks to subscribe to the Associated Press. John DeMers works hard to draw a faithful picture of the Marfa he has vis- ited so often. All in all, he has done a good job in getting our Marfa down on paper. Now it’s your turn. The next time you read a book set in the Big Bend, use my two-pronged test – intertwined story and set- ting and accurate details – and see if it rings true! 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